Club President Dan Benig evaluated me for this project. He found the content to be information-rich. The delivery was natural like "painting a picture" with vivid descriptions. He wanted a bigger appeal for a wider audience though and include information like buyback (ROI) and costing.
GE Doc Noy liked the triad used: "tupig, patupat, bagoong", and suggested eliminating jargon in the speech.
Shown below is a scanned copy of the meeting program.
And that's... a wrap!
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